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واول واحده هتشارك سيكريت وانا جاتلي فكره اسم الموضوع منها وكمان شجعتني اكتبه

يالا ياسكرت اي خدمه عايزين نشوف ابداعات بقي

فكره حلوه أوي و إن شاء الله أعرض مقطوعات من إبداعات و نشوف رأي بعض فيها

ان شاء الله
منتظرين
وانا مش بكتب بس مستمعه جيده
كنت زمان بكتب خواطر بالأنجليش مش عارفه ازاي بس كانت حلوة قوي بس ده زمان قوي,يمكن تصحوا جوايا الحوار ده

إيه ده يا سوووووووووبى بتدبسينى
انا على قدى والله

عامة مش هكسفك انا كمان عايزة أجدد الموضوع جوايا لأنى بكتب على فترات متقطعه كده
يالا خلونا نشارك بعض واللى جواه حاجه يقدر يعبر عنها
إنتظرونى بقى مع أول خاطرة

احنا فى انتظارك يا نهى
اوعى تاخرى علينا

بسم الله ما شاء الله عليكى
بجد حلوة اوى

بدبسك ايه بس ده انتي جامده جدا
اللهم بارك
حلوة قوي

صحيح بتسمعي هشام الجخ,شعره حلو قوي

جميل يا سيكريت الله يوفقك

دى قصة كدة صغنونة .. بس يا رب تعجبكو

Walking on sands..I saw a little girl standing alone looking at el sea as if she was born here..when I got closer..I saw her innocent face ..she was like an angel with her white dress swaing like the waves drawing a paint of nature by her golden hair...

I wondered " Sweety, why are you standing here alone?? ".." Don't you have some toys to play with at home?".
She raised her little head and said " I'm standing her with my friend "...I looked every where but I saw nothing except some rocks..sands..sea & the two of us !!

I heard an angel voice interrupted my thoughts " Close your eyes ,Miss "... I gave a ' what-you-are-saying' look...she insisted " Do that..you will see , Miss ".....I did what she told me...I might be not convinced at that time..but I closed my eyes !

I told her " Now, I'm seeing nothing..only darkness ... with the breeze of the sea thatI hear !! "
She spoke to me with a different tone, I knew at then It was that of a little child but It was also of a so pure thought.." Look beyond darkness .. cross the limit of closed eyes .. blend your soul with the sea .. feel the breeze , don't hear it .. don't try to think..just leave yourself for what it should be "

I did that...did it spontaneously...I really felt something arousing inside me..I felt the breeze touching every part in my soul not my body..I had a vision..a vision with a feeling..It was someone ...someone's spirit...It was you!! yes, you!!
I found you standing beside me..holding my hand..taking me as if we have reached the moon...oh!! It was your voice!!..I could hear you..you were whispering to me...But suddenly I heard another voice , calling me ," Miss..Miss"
I opend my eyes & turnd to the little girl " Did you see your friend ,Miss??"...she looked at me with a hope .
" Yes!.. Yes ,dear..I saw him..he was just satnding with me...I wasn't alone !".
The girl smiled & looked to the sea " I saw mine too !! "

I left her with a smile...walked awy..I looked at her for the last time & I told myself " I should leave you..with your friend "

nona84 كتب:

بسم الله ما شاء الله عليكى
بجد حلوة اوى

ربنا يخليكي يا نونا
تسلميلى حبيتى
وشكرا لردك وذوقك

أرق أمنياتى

م.هالة كتب:

بسم الله ما شاء الله

جميلة قوى يا نهى

كنت عاوزة اسالك سؤال

أنت ممكن تكتبى عن موضوع أنت عايزة تكتبى عنه

ولا بتسيبى نفسك و الموضوع هو اللى بيجيلك

و يا ريت لو عندك حاجة كتباها عن الإرادة والأمل أبقى أكتبهيلنا

sobysoo كتب:

بدبسك ايه بس ده انتي جامده جدا
اللهم بارك
حلوة قوي

صحيح بتسمعي هشام الجخ,شعره حلو قوي

رهف الكلام كتب:

جميل يا سيكريت الله يوفقك

Roraa كتب:

ما شاء الله ايه يا عم الجامد ده
ربنا يزيدك يا نهي
ويارب يقدر كل الحب ده

scorpio2810 كتب:

دى قصة كدة صغنونة .. بس يا رب تعجبكو

Walking on sands..I saw a little girl standing alone looking at el sea as if she was born here..when I got closer..I saw her innocent face ..she was like an angel with her white dress swaing like the waves drawing a paint of nature by her golden hair...

I wondered " Sweety, why are you standing here alone?? ".." Don't you have some toys to play with at home?".
She raised her little head and said " I'm standing her with my friend "...I looked every where but I saw nothing except some rocks..sands..sea & the two of us !!

I heard an angel voice interrupted my thoughts " Close your eyes ,Miss "... I gave a ' what-you-are-saying' look...she insisted " Do that..you will see , Miss ".....I did what she told me...I might be not convinced at that time..but I closed my eyes !

I told her " Now, I'm seeing nothing..only darkness ... with the breeze of the sea thatI hear !! "
She spoke to me with a different tone, I knew at then It was that of a little child but It was also of a so pure thought.." Look beyond darkness .. cross the limit of closed eyes .. blend your soul with the sea .. feel the breeze , don't hear it .. don't try to think..just leave yourself for what it should be "

I did that...did it spontaneously...I really felt something arousing inside me..I felt the breeze touching every part in my soul not my body..I had a vision..a vision with a feeling..It was someone ...someone's spirit...It was you!! yes, you!!
I found you standing beside me..holding my hand..taking me as if we have reached the moon...oh!! It was your voice!!..I could hear you..you were whispering to me...But suddenly I heard another voice , calling me ," Miss..Miss"
I opend my eyes & turnd to the little girl " Did you see your friend ,Miss??"...she looked at me with a hope .
" Yes!.. Yes ,dear..I saw him..he was just satnding with me...I wasn't alone !".
The girl smiled & looked to the sea " I saw mine too !! "

I left her with a smile...walked awy..I looked at her for the last time & I told myself " I should leave you..with your friend "

ما شاء الله عليكى ياسيكريت بجد احساس جميل جدا وتعبيرات اجمل
واحب اشارك معاكم بحاجه من خوطرى اتمنى انها تعجبكم

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ياقلبه
قد كنت يوماً بيتى
كما كان قلبى يوماً
بيته
راح بيديه
هدم معبد حبنا
بعدما بكل الحب
بنيته
ونسى انه بيته
وراح يشترى بيت
خال انه بيته
يشترى حب
يششترى قلب
يشترى معبد غيره
وكل هذا بماله
وتركنى هنا
وحدى لأعين
هامت شوقاً لبُعده
ترك زهوراً ذبلت كمداً لفراقه
وقبل ان يرحل
قتل قلب
كان ملىء بحبه
تركه باحثا
عن ضحيه اخرى له
ياقلبه
اتراه يرجع بيته
ام قد نسى
ما كان لى وما له
ياقلبه
قد كنت يوماً بيتى
كما كان قلبى يوما
بيته

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